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Nowadays, along with the development of technology, some people are confused whether they are still in charge of technology or not. Furthermore, many films have already described a war between human being and robot in the future. Can it become reality? A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that men are able to control technology. However, other people express a strong desire to state that technology will be out of control in one day.

Despite of the rapid evolution, technology is based on human being’s knowledge all the time. Without the advanced knowledge and science, technology can’t create such a tremendous progress. Moreover, technology is used to make people’s lives convenient and wonderful, so it depends on people’s purpose. Hence, people exert great

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